With morning dews, sunsets, flowers and trees into balmy blossoms

Do you think this is a little better?

Also, if you want to keep each paragraph in 4 sentences, feel free to take my translation below. After all, it is still a translation:-)
Out of my eyes, it flew into tears
Yet no sorrow was felt.

Yet is better than but, you may want to change your but too, if you choose to keep your own version.