李某贴出了 好的翻译， 粗看之后，有以下程度不等的错误，
误译，或拙译。

1
we let out the five pigs, bought at a greatly inflated price a few days earlier, and they rolled and kicked their way around, grunting their delight as only pigs can do in shit.
牵来前几天花高价买来的五头猪，它们在地上翻滚，哼声打闹，只有在屎里的猪才会这么兴高采烈。

错误：不是只有在屎里的猪才这么兴高采烈，
而是只有猪才这样。
参考译法：
只有猪在粪堆里才如此大放欢声。

2
a few hours later, as a great cry went up and the church bells began to chime, each one coming fast on the other, telling us that our defenses had been penetrated, .
几个小时后，随着一阵响亮的呼喊声，各处教堂的钟开始鸣叫，大家奔走呼告，告诉我们城市的防线已经被撕裂，
错误：each one coming fast on the other不是大家奔走呼告
而是钟声一声又接一声。
参考译法：
教堂的钟声一声紧似一声。
3
whatever courage we might have found was no match for the numbers they could launch.
随后，尽管我军奋勇搏杀，敌军却势不可挡。
错误：这里没有译出我军的英勇无法抵消敌军在数量上的优势
参考译法：
纵使我们有无比的英勇，
也因寡不敌众而无法匹敌源源不绝的敌人。
4
But Rome had chosen comfort over common sense, and with the Ponte Sisto taken early, there was nothing to stop them.
但罗马尚存侥幸，西克斯图桥早早被攻占之后，再也没有什么能阻挡敌军了。
错误：chosen comfort over common sense
这里不是尚存侥幸，而是因贪图安逸而不顾常识。
参考译法：
可是罗马却因贪图安逸而不顾常识地保留了这座桥。
5
In her bedroom, my lady, who had been scrupulous as ever in the business of her beauty, put the finishing touches to her toilette,and came downstairs.
我家小姐在卧房中，依然聚精会神地打扮自己，完成了最后的装扮，走下楼去。
错误：此时小姐做的是抹完最后一笔，
聚精会神地打扮自己是在此前。
参考译法：此前一直凝神于梳妆打扮的小姐，涂完妆彩的最后一笔，走下楼去。