改了一点儿。将用于举报信

送交者: Yush 于 2009-11-26, 15:42:13:

回答: 我这里有一段自我介绍：由 Yush 于 2009-11-26, 15:37:41:

We are netters of the New Threads (XYS, xys.org), a U.S. based Chinese website dedicated to fighting against academic corruption in China. XYS has been exposing Dr. Xiao's academic misconducts and his fraudulent procedure since 2005, and recently drawn the attention of Chinese
lawyers and media, whose investigations further revealed more astonishing facts regarding the Xiao Procedure.

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斑竹接受science采访的英文报道链接可以提供一下，如果他想知道更多关于xys的话 (无内容) - oztiger (0 bytes) 2009-11-27, 03:48:24 (390973)
- eddie整理的连接里应该有合适的英文报道介绍xys - oztiger (147 bytes) 2009-11-27, 04:42:27 (390975)
website可以拿掉。加一句 led by Dr. Fang Zhouzi - JFF (160 bytes) 2009-11-26, 15:53:54 (390837)
建议后一句分成两句。 - james_hussein_bond (448 bytes) 2009-11-26, 15:49:29 (390835)
一点意见:fraudulent procedure 是不是过了一点？ (无内容) - lightman (0 bytes) 2009-11-26, 15:47:03 (390833)
- 可以改成"his fraudulent representation of..." (无内容) - eddie (0 bytes) 2009-11-26, 15:51:15 (390836)
  - 英语能不能好点？ - fadingmemory (31 bytes) 2009-11-28, 10:30:55 (391227)
  - Eddie前辈早就该多给点建议了：） (无内容) - lightman (0 bytes) 2009-11-26, 19:19:33 (390878)
    - 不好意思 - eddie (28 bytes) 2009-11-26, 19:26:19 (390879)
  - VERY GOOD！ (无内容) - JFF (0 bytes) 2009-11-26, 16:02:02 (390840)
- 我的意思是说，现阶段的证据可能还不足够对这个procedure本身 - lightman (6 bytes) 2009-11-26, 15:48:41 (390834)
这个很简洁很好。建议把netters改成SUPPORTERS。 (无内容) - JFF (0 bytes) 2009-11-26, 15:44:34 (390831)

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