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送交者: BigMac 于 2009-11-24, 22:01:17:

回答: 看看这段改的如何由 fuzzify 于 2009-11-24, 21:54:53:

We knew even less about how the international peers evaluated his procedure.
----> We knew even less about what evaluation the international peers made about his procedure.

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同意这个改动，知道评价即可，不是知道用什么方法评的 (无内容) - PoohHunny2 (0 bytes) 2009-11-24, 22:44:17 (390189)
no offense，不过我不理解为什么要这么改 (无内容) - lightman (0 bytes) 2009-11-24, 22:06:28 (390166)
- How means method or manner. According to the Chinese article, obviously - BigMac (189 bytes) 2009-11-24, 22:16:49 (390175)
  - You are right. (无内容) - fuzzify (0 bytes) 2009-11-25, 09:40:00 (390338)

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