"Xiao reflex arc", the controversial operation procedure,
---> " The Xiao reflex arc", a controversial operation procedure,

Commonweal lawsuit lawyer Peng Jian is busy
---> Peng jian, a commonwealth lawsuit lawyer, has been busy ..

Oct 26th
--> Oct. 26, (-th, only in oral)

the mothers of two children with spina bifida filed
---> the mothers of THE two children with spina...

the only effective way was for many patients to
--> the only effective way for many patients was to

Peng Jian told Science News that he started the effort
---> ..." Science News was told by Peng, who had started the effort...

since 2006 - in this year, Fang Zhou Zi lost his case against Xiao Chuan Guo.
---> since 2006 when Fang Zhou Zi lost his case against Xiao Chuan Guo.

when the names on his list had totaled a few dozens
---> when the names of patients on his list had totaled a few dozens

September 2009
 In September 2009, …

among the 150 plus contacts obtained through the exchanges between the patients,
- among 150 plus patients that had been contacted, more than 80 were successfully interviewed on phone, and 15 in person .

we receive at least two, up to three or four calls each day, that provide evidence for the case."
- we receive two to four phone calls each day that express their willingness to provide evidence for the case."

Among the patients who had received the "Xiao procedure" and been contacted so far,
-Among all the patients who have received the "Xiao procedure" and contacted by us so far,

The ratio of cases with evident improvements is also low
- The percentage of patients with obvious improvements is also low

In the certificate, it was claimed: Starting from Jan. of 2006,
- The certificate claimed that “since Jan. 2006,…