This is better than that "炎阳脱衣欲要行"



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送交者: boxer 于 2005-4-25, 13:50:52:

回答: 歪诗一首:七律 观粪青上街游行有感 由 炎阳 于 2005-4-25, 09:25:13:

The person you are simulating is changed from "李白" to "毛泽东".

You should learn something from Latino2, "出口成章". Or from "Shine", who could write out her feelings correctly.

Generally speaking, this kind of "simulation" poem is no good.



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