眼睛爱吃冰激凌，没有什么损害吧。随手给你指出几个error吧：

I yield my seats to the old
-I yield my seats to the elderly

Zhouzi's getaway was so marginal
-Did you mean "magical"?

They planed this for half a year.
-They planned this for half a year.

deterring good peoples, encouraging the bad peoples and alienating obedient peoples

-peoples > people