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送交者: gadfly 于 2009-11-24, 14:36:14:
回答: Visiting Volunteers Were Shocked by “Xiao Procedure”--translation 由 blobfish 于 2009-11-24, 14:09:05:
1. which claims to have ... -> which was claimed to have ...
2. the surgery can cause disable -> the surgery may lead to disbility
3. non-adults -> minors
4. Zhengzhou University, one of the most famous universities in China. -> 原文中没有。原文中讲的是“一家小医院”
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