"许多年后" appeared twice and feels repetitive. The first

"许多年后" appeared twice and feels repetitive. The first

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送交者: 2cents 于 2009-05-06, 09:26:58:

回答: 斑竹这首诗中的女孩又是谁？由 USTC3 于 2009-05-06, 07:32:49:

"许多年后" might be changed to "许多年 Le", which reads better.

那能改吗？你显然没读明白。 (无内容) - 方舟子 (0 bytes) 2009-05-06, 13:28:23 (322877)