平静幸福,我有个好的剧本,你写成小说最合适


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送交者: 008 于 2009-03-28, 17:55:05:

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if you patiently tell this spoiled kid like this:

'we are poor and the whole family are struggling
for food, we can not afford to make more mess,
please let's go home so that you can take a rest
and your siblings help you to clean up the mess, maybe
you will understand better when you grown up,
nothing is easy although anything is possible,'

but, this spoiled kid refuse to listen and
insist that ' YOU must die, otherwise,
I would not do anything', what choices do you have!

Meet this spoiled kid's requirement!
or
Stop this spoiled kid's requirement!

既有父子亲情,结尾还能死上个吧人,你觉得写个小说如何?
如何从上面的情节过渡到把儿子杀了,youngshi可以提供详情。




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