送交者: fengcu2000 于 2005-12-28, 12:12:10:
回答: 老方的信，完全重写了第一段和最后一段，和改了些小错 由 xj 于 2005-12-28, 11:38:29:
Some suggestions for your reference:
1. Furthermore, the same institute also ...
---The same institute also ...
2. Further, Mr. Yardley reported:
---According to Mr. Yardley, ....
3. The Ministry of Water Resources did not involve in this project or the debate,...
---The Ministry of Water Resources did not ..., nor the debate,
4. which was even before the controversy started
---before the controversy even started