第一段是不是应该更明确、硬朗些?(附上我的改动稿)



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送交者: dafeng 于 2005-12-27, 22:25:26:

回答: 致《纽约时报》的信(草稿) 由 方舟子 于 2005-12-27, 19:32:28:

Rule by Law: Seeking a Public Voice on China's 'Angry River' by Jim Yardley (December 26, 2005) is a biased and inaccurate report. As a loyal reader of the Times, I have been often citing the Times as the standard of good journalism. However, this time I am very disappointed with the inaccuracy and misinformation in Mr. Yardley's report. Actually, in my email answering to Mr. Yardley's questions (see the enclosure), I corrected such inaccuracy and misinformation, and provided him with some facts which can be easily checked and verified. Unfortunately, Mr. Yardley overlooked, if not intentionally omitted, my opinions and reported only one side story told by the “environmentalists"



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