Your intention is obvious, maybe too obvious. I still think the story is
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送交者: chouqilozi 于 2012-04-11, 12:05:59:
回答: That is where my art shine! 由 alabama 于 2012-04-11, 11:56:08:
better without the twist in the end, which only serves to stretch too far and hurt the soundness of the plot.
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