送交者: skipper3 于 2006-3-31, 16:56:26:

回答: How about this accomplishment statement 由 吴礼 于 2006-3-31, 16:18:19:

I think "penetration...market segments" should be stated before "cultivate alliance", because the former is what you have achieved(the goal) and the later is how you did it. In this kind of statement you need to emphasize the result not your means. What does that mean anyway?

• Disagree. - Latino2 (102 bytes) 2006-3-31, 17:03:57
  • one can cultivate as many as he wants, but it is - skipper3 (56 bytes) 2006-3-31, 17:26:38

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