送交者: xj 于 2006-1-23, 17:13:33:
回答: 两篇都读了,实话实说, 没看出写得怎么好。 由 Latino2 于 2006-1-23, 16:29:44:
and the above two stories.
It lacks something like humanity, insight, and reflection.
From a writer point of view, her story structure and writing skills are kind of immature. Many netters can write better than that.
But I like the story written in the New York Time. But again, it is written more like a Chinese middle school student.
It's the content that attracks attention, not the writing per se.